I feel like the singing was decent, but the pauses you choose causes the song to sound awkward. It almost feels choppy, to me, that you stop every so and so second. I understand you need to pause for the chords, but it diminishes the quality of this song in particular.
I also feel your voice was a bit soft for this song, as I am a fan of Lana Del Ray myself. But, overall, it is your cover and I feel like you did what was needed to make it good.
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