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Great

I don't find much here, all I can really say is keep it up.

Your melody isn't lacking much structure, or has any bad, unfitting sounds.

Favorited&Keep going!

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RetromanOMG responds:

Yes, a favorite! Thank you for your thoughts.

Good ^^

There isn't much to complain about here, all I can really say is keep up the good work.

Your structure is nice, and so is your flow.

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Subliminalvids responds:

Thanks :)

Just fine!

I find this just a nice, flowing low piece.

I can't really find anything else to say but make it a bit louder, maybe add a drum or a soft guitar note.

Feels like it needs another instrument or a louder noise to come all together.

Either way, it's still good.

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Angiki responds:

Perhaps, but I wanted to keep it an orchestral piece, without guitars and such.

Good, but needs work.

I like the actual guitar playing from the middle to the end, but there's a lot I think you could've done better at.

First of all, the beginning didn't really fit with what was coming up. I feel like if your gonna do heavy metal or screamo, you need some serious guitar playing, and a bit of the drums if you could. Not like you didn't have any serious good guitar, but it need to just rip as fast as the speed of light.

Another thing with the lyrics, like haggard said, was that they were too long to fit with the flow.

Though I don't personally like this type of music, I figure you did your best, and it didn't really move from what the genre of music really was.

Either way, there's some stuff to improve, and other things to keep up on.

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Jeffaro responds:

I agree with you.

Thanks for the review.

Good!

Well, it was a good tune. Nothing seemed to be wrong it.

Nothing much for me to go on about. Good job sir! Keep up the good work!! ^.^

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TuRdz responds:

Thanks!

I like it ^.^

0:59 - about 1:40

I felt an odd transition, made me go o_O huh...? Because all these random noises started to come out no where.

I kinda felt like that whole snippet was another melody, since it seemed to have more of a mild one in the beginning.

There was another sequence with that same tune, near the end of the song, but it had fit in a bit more than the first.

Either way, this is good ^.^'...(P.S. NO clue what NGap Dubstep is. Inform if you want to in a reply).

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dietsnapple135 responds:

Newgrounds Audio Portal Dubstep Contest. Yeah, the transition is extreme, but that's sort of what I wanted. I'm a sucker for happy, synthy, trancey intros, but I wanted a big drop and a bass-driven dubstep chorus, so getting between those two is a bit of a leap, but I tried to make it work.

Thanks for the awesome review ^^

Good

My poor ears...at the beginning, the base line jumping up made me kinda squeal, since my volume was turned somewhat loud. But, I turned it down, and I enjoyed it.

I kinda wish the baseline wasn't so deep, because it kinda hurts my ears!

Good job

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I-Saved-The-World responds:

Perhaps i should take another look at EQ'ing / mixing it so it doesnt sound so sharp! D:

Thanks for the review :)

Love it

Sounds really slow and fast paced at the same time, I dunno how, but it does!

It has a nice beat to it too, nothing really too much or too little here, everything just falls right into place so my ears feel nice and..relaxed? Joyed?

I dunno, probably be some happy synonym.

I love your stuff, keep making it ^-^

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EricFreeman responds:

Thanks! I'm glad you're a fan of my stuff now :3

Thanks for listening and reviewing! :D

Nice.

For some reason, for every second that passed, I felt like some random singer was gonna come out of nowhere and sing. But, sadly, he/she didn't :[

Sounds like it would make a nice singing tune for a singer to sing to, or at least one component to a song a person could use to record a song.

I really like it, Favorited, will sing to this when I'm alone(preferably in the shower).

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camoshark responds:

Lol, thanks alot!

I really never envisionned having a singer sing in one of my songs, even less on this one, but if you say so, I'll believe you!

Really glad you enjoyed, hope you'll like the finished version!!

Cheers

Sounds very calm/saddish

I really like it, reminds me of some video game twist just happened, and now this music is playing in the background...something I think a Final Fantasy game would use, probably for a game over or something of the sorts.

Good job : D & Favorited

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Stargenx responds:

Thanks for the review! A lot of people have compared my songs to Final Fantasy music. I've never played the game series, perhaps I should.

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