YumeSin's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[DJ Dela - Energize]

Sounds. . .

I can't say this is original, but I can say it's good. Normal club music, with normal clubbing beats.

Since you can(judging by this) make the simple stuff, I'd suggest broadening your horizons.

Try some different beats, find your own sound.

Create something of your own.

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DJDela responds:

Yes, of course, I will always try to improve my skills.
Thank you for your helpful review.

[Subtle Shift]

Hm...

I can't see why the scores are so low with this one.

It has a solid composition and a nice beat. Nothing is really wrong with this piece, and I really can't find anything bad enough to point out.

Good job!
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Xenophaje responds:

Thanks alot!
(Damn Zero-bombers... They always find their way to me)

[Dinner Rush]

Repeats at times.

I like it as a whole, but I wish there were some parts I could tweak.

First it would be the piano's tempo at the end, and part of the beginning. Make a bit lower in the beginning, and then go a bit faster near the end.

Instead of changing the tone near the end, you should've just sped up the actual piano. I think that would've been a nice dramatic touch ^_^

A bit of violin would've helped this too!

Good job!

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Espiongold responds:

Yea. You are right. I myself felt I messed up the ending. I do love the speed, I love to speed my songs up, I feel it gives them energy which you feel. I compleatly agree with the violin because when I had finnished this and listened to it I knew it was a voilin song right away. I will come back and fix this peice later.

[Stargenx - CardiacDistillation]

Why is this rated so low > : O

This is nice and mellow!

Nothing overpowers another, and it fits together perfectly.

I can't say to add anything else, since everything works together perfectly here.

) Good job&Favorited.

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Stargenx responds:

Thanks for the review!
This was born of a lucid state of mind when I wanted to make a relaxing song. I'm glad you enjoy it!

[Fun Ball]

Sounds like one of those funny noire cartoons

I like the piano the most, and I enjoyed it all.

Maybe added another instrument or two would've put this over the top, but that's just me : P

Good job!

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Espiongold responds:

I acctualy was not intending on uploading this song, infact I was'nt intending on making it atall. I just recordrd a random tune to see how I could mess with the tempo, this was compleatly random, and just a test. however one I had it on and listened to it I realised it was very enjoyable

[Wack Ass Motherfucker (3S)]

o.o...

Maybe it's just my preference, but I rather not hear most of the words throughout the song, but more towards the end.

I like the beats and stuff, they went well, but the voice sounded out of place at certain parts.

Overall, good job!

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Dj-GST responds:

Thanks man.

Vocals are an essential part of the structure for Hardcore. The track is basically built around them.

Thanks!

-3S-

[Consenesco]

Less base por favor <3

I like the creepiness/craziness of this beat, but, I believe the base kinda overshadows the other small things within this.

Make it a bit lower, so we could enjoy the other little beats and dings.

Overall, it was good though ^_^

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mikkim responds:

Thanks for telling me about how the bass is to much

[<EagleGuard> Last Stand]

Really nice ^^

Its' been awhile since I've heard music like this, it reminds me of TOS.

Like, inside of the book?..Yeah, I'm a nerd.

Anyway! I really like the beats and flow of it, and sad to say I barely understand what you are talking about with signatures and tempo, but it sounds good XD.

Either way, I love this.

Favorited&Good job : D

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EagleGuard responds:

Haha, many thanks ^^ Glad you liked it ;)

The details were meant for people that also like to compose/play an instrument, so you aren't missing much if that is not the case xD I have no idea what you mean with TOS though (then again, I might just be stupid =p)

Anyway, thanks for the review!

[Blackholes]

Good, yet. . .

for some reason, i feel like the beginning didn't need that ringing.

It would've been okay just for that, then bring in the ringing, then the beat that comes in.

Would've made for a smoother transition in my opinion.

But good nonetheless : D

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KieranNG responds:

By ringing I'm guessing you mean delay? I'll work on changing the usage of delay on the pad then.

Thanks for the review btw.

[Pseudo-Insanity]

All of the sections work together

When listening to things like this, I usually find a part that seems just completely awkward.

But with this, I can sense that all of the parts you've used make it as one, and not as a lot of small snippets smashed together. Theres' really nothing I could suggest to you, really.

Good job!

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Birdinator99 responds:

That's really interesting, because that was my biggest flaw when I started composing -- I had all these great ideas, but they didn't work together, so my songs sounded like 2 or 3 different songs!

Actually, I still do that once in a while -_- but I'm trying to get better.

Thanks for the kind words!