YumeSin's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tethersong]

Instruments good, vocals need work.

I like the drums especially, but the vocals are...well, let's run through some of the lines he didn't do well on:

Those kids damn well know how to cook
The singer said something different, along the lines of:
"Those kids sure know how to cook"

It's too late to say sorry
The pitch they used, or maybe they cracked a note, but I just feel as if they sung a bit too loudly in this line. I feel like he should've got gradually louder with the verse.

Well, that's about it. Sure there was a few more things to discuss, but I think I touched up on everything!

P.S. Are the lyrics in order or no?
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Sawdust responds:

Thanks a lot for the review! Very helpful.

[Rek- White Magic]

Nicely Done!

At points, like 3:18-3:21, it sounds computerized heavily.

Maybe just me, but that's how I hear it.

Besides those moments, this worked out pretty well.

I hope to hear more from you ^.^
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ReklessCreati0n responds:

I will take that into consideration, Thanks for the review I hope you enjoyed it at least, and I have pleanty of music for you to listen to :)

[MoL- Stuff of Legends]

Found it good

I didn't really think the guitar ruined it.

Reading the comments before listening, I thought the guitar was horrible...but I have to disagree.

Sounds smooth with it, a bit of work needs to be done near the end. I found the beats too clustered together.
Good job!
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MeteorManMike responds:

I knew from the start that looping to the rising strings would be difficult. I wouldn't have to worry about it if I could figure how to loop from a certain point (0:07) in my programming.

Someone else likes the guitar. Matter of personal preference...? I'll have to ponder that for next time...

Thanks for reviewing!

[Scooter Rizzuto]

Good, but vocal. . .

You are convincing, but I believe you need to project your voice a bit more.

I feel so because it makes it a bit more authentic, since more sports speakers have to talk over cheers, boos, and even some rowdiness of the crowd at points.

You did a good job, overall.

:3 Keep going with your passion!
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Coop responds:

Yeah - I need a stand and pop-guard for that, as the mic quality was compromised if I really projected my voice, as with Brain Blessed.

[Exploration of Space & Time]

Beginning reminds me of. . .

Lady Gaga. Don't ask me why : P. It sounds like the background she used for Edge of Glory to me.

The song as a whole sounds wonderful!

Calming but exciting, yet good through and through.

<3 Your work sir : 3
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neolinked responds:

haha lady gaga? thx for the review ^^

[Her Smile]

<333

I'll be honest: I'm not into lengthy things. They somewhat annoy me.

This one, however, calms me. I never really got that itch I usually get with listening to something long, and change it.

I listened to the whole thing, and I have to say, as a listener, I really enjoyed this.

Good job on getting me out of my habit!

P.S. What inspired you to name it 'Her Smile'?
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BuggMusic responds:

Thank you so much! You're the first person to not say that my songs are too long and repetitive! lol

As for the inspiration........................hm mm........... ;)

[Elements of Life]

Thumbs up.

I'd have to agree with Xeno with it being scratchy at points, but other than that, it's really good.

^^ Everything ties together, and nothing is out of place.

Good job, good sir *tips hand* haha.
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MrRandomist responds:

thanks for the review.. im working on the scratchiness.. i just don't know where to look >.<
on my system it seems fine? what time(s) does it seem scratchy?

thanks :D

-DJRavenz

[NikM - Horizon]

Feels. . .

I dunno how to feel exactly with this song, but it's well done.

Not sure where to use it, but it's a videogame-esque mood.

I'd enjoyed it and loved it, but can't seem to find a connection with the title...maybe I'm just a bit slow? ^^;
Good job!

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lxNikMxl responds:

Haha I'm glad you liked it. I don't exactly know where I would use it either, all I do is find inspiration and make a song. As for the title, I listen to my song and the first thing that it makes me think of or reminds me of is what I call it. This song put the image of a sunset or something very distant into my mind. Thank you for taking the time to review, it means a lot.

- NikM

[Once the Smoke Clears]

<3 it

Sounds videogamy to me, reminds me of the 64 zelda games.

Very calming, relaxing, and the flute carries this very well. I think another instrument would've cluttered it too much, and the flute was a perfect choice to go with this type of flow.

Thanks for showing this great work ^.^

Favorited <3

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CheckeredZebra responds:

Thank you for the review =D And wow, a favorite O__O! Thanks!

[Project M (v3)]

I swear I heard this before. . .

Think I played the same game you did. This sounds a bit too familiar!

I really like your spin on it, and I really enjoyed it through and through.

Scantly knowing the original and this version, I believe you did as well as you could remixing this x]

ten out of ten for yuu!

Good job!

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sumguy720 responds:

Thank you!
Is that a little person? I love it!