YumeSin's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mr Noname McFannypack]

Good

I'm not really good at titles myself most of the time, and I think the smoothness of this melody makes up for not having a good title x3.

I really like it, I don't think there's anything that's a huge problem.

Good job!

Review Request Club <(@.@)^

[Little Hope {Frozen}]

Feels right for boss music.

It's not quite why it wouldn't be used for boss music, but for what game?

I think this would fit well with a story with a bit of comedy, since it doesn't sound so serious to me.

The melody itself sounds smooth, but has a hint of laughter mixed within it.

Good job ^.^

Review Request Club <(@.@)>

lazy-dave responds:

I can see why you would say it doesn't sound very serious and it wasn't meant to be super serious so something comedic could work lol. Thanks for the reviews, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[El Fudge - Fried]

Like it ^-^

I like how this all fits together, and that there are a few funny sounds inserted in here and there.

Not much to say but keep it going and keep it up!

^^ Only thing I have to complain about is how does the title relate to the song?

Review Request Club <(@.@)>

Syztm responds:

Haha thanks man, I'll try to keep it up. The vocal sample in this track is from Stephen Fry, so that's why the title is Fried (Fry --> Fried.. yeah.)

Aaaaanywho, thanks for the review :)

<(@.@)> (because that smiley is epic as hell)

[Perseverance {Frozen}]

I like this!

Can't say there is much I disliked here!

The beats at points felt a bit too computerized or pushed at certain points, but they feel nice for the majority of the song!

GJ!

Review Request Club <(@.@)>

lazy-dave responds:

Thanks a lot for the review I'm glad you liked it! :D

[KzX - Konvulzions 2.0]

<3 it

I haven't heard the original, but this is great!

I love everything about this, it's creepy but also draws me to it. It's light, but also has a bit of darkness to it!

Added&GJ!!

Review Request Club <(@.@)>

Kayoszx responds:

You can listen to the original if you want :P It's in my audio submissions.
The first one is generally the same but with lower quality synths and just a bunch of bitcrushed wobbles. Don't get me wrong, it sounds pretty different, and it's still good, just not as good as this one.

[Wicked Warning]

I like the guitar.

I also liked the concept of this song, but I feel like the singer should the first four lines softly, then bring it up for the next three stanza's, then slowly tone it down for the last four lines.

Another thing would be the dip when you say "You've made your truce with the devil"

I was expecting for you to yell the last word, but you dropped down quite a bit, which made me frown :(

I was singing along to this, thinking of some changes.

But yeah, you and your band still have a lot of changes to do, this being first take.

Good job!

Review Request Club <(@.@)>

Sawdust responds:

Thanks a bunch, man!

To be fair though, I'm not good at yelling :P

[Veela-Night Vision(KroweR]

Good, but a few things.

I like the beginning, but I feel like you used the wrong type of sound to mix in with the lyrics. Seems like a soft song, and I just dislike the clash.

It was good, besides that, but I feel like it deserved some sort of flute or wind instrument and not what you used.

Overall, pretty good, hope you win!

Review Request Club <(@.@)>

KroweMusic responds:

I appreciate the honest review...glad ya liked it and thanks for the support! :D

[We Shall Overcome (Demo)]

Good

I like it overall, but I think you should've mixed 0:54 with some light drums of the sorts, or maybe something different.

Feels like the line itself is dry by itself, needs something to glue it together to help mix with the meaning of the tune.

Other than that, great work!

Review Request Club <(@.@)>

itsameyayo responds:

I agree.

[Let the Bass Kick Instrumental]

Old School.

It's been awhile since I heard anything old school, it's been either Lady Gaga, or Paramore for me.

Anyways, I really like how you did this. It flowed really well, and the words weren't too overboard.

You kept at a pace, and made it all come together as one piece.

Good job : D

Review Request Club <(^.^)>

DJ-Chilvan responds:

Haha thanks for the review! I appreciate the comments! Im glad to know that I was able to break the chains of Gaga hahahaXD

[BAZ - Hell Yes! (DNB)]

Something I'd listen to while working.

Based on how my finals are coming up, I'd listen to this while doing some Trig.

Very nice, relaxing but at the same time provoking. Makes me feel good I guess.

Nice melody, keep the good songs rolling sir : )

Review Request Club <(^.^)>

BAZmotherfucker responds:

Uggghhhh, finals. >.>