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Overall, I enjoyed it, but there were some problems here with elements overpowering the main melody.

At 1:20 until 1:27, I feel that the sounds used made the song a bit disconnected, and needed a smoother transition into 1:29. Another time this happens is at 1:42-44, the loudest reaches its peak and is kinda too high for me. Maybe just my ears but just a lower pitch there would make a smoother transition.

Overall, good job for a first major song!
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Oshii77 responds:

I see... So I need to work on EQ, mixing and smoother transitions.

Thank you very much for the helpful feedback!
:)

I have a really open mind about music, and I like this. The guitar is well done, as well as some of the beats/rifts(?) in there.

The only reason I didn't give this five stars is, at some points, the audio becomes choppy or static I should say. Around 0:20-5 there is some static and 0:44-7 there is more. I am not sure if it's my headphones or just an error on my part, but it lowered my enjoyment a bit.

Well done!
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Awesome.

There's nothing I really want to put in this review that's negative.

Sounds great. What else can I ask for?

Has a meaning, somewhat of a back story, and I enjoy it.

Keep it up&Favorited!
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CheckeredZebra responds:

Much appreciated, I'm glad you enjoyed it :D

Instruments good, vocals need work.

I like the drums especially, but the vocals are...well, let's run through some of the lines he didn't do well on:

Those kids damn well know how to cook
The singer said something different, along the lines of:
"Those kids sure know how to cook"

It's too late to say sorry
The pitch they used, or maybe they cracked a note, but I just feel as if they sung a bit too loudly in this line. I feel like he should've got gradually louder with the verse.

Well, that's about it. Sure there was a few more things to discuss, but I think I touched up on everything!

P.S. Are the lyrics in order or no?
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Sawdust responds:

Thanks a lot for the review! Very helpful.

Nicely Done!

At points, like 3:18-3:21, it sounds computerized heavily.

Maybe just me, but that's how I hear it.

Besides those moments, this worked out pretty well.

I hope to hear more from you ^.^
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ReklessCreati0n responds:

I will take that into consideration, Thanks for the review I hope you enjoyed it at least, and I have pleanty of music for you to listen to :)

I really like it ^_^

This would sound fitting in a dark cave, or when some main characters get captured in game.

Nothing really falls out of place, well done, and Favorited!
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Found it good

I didn't really think the guitar ruined it.

Reading the comments before listening, I thought the guitar was horrible...but I have to disagree.

Sounds smooth with it, a bit of work needs to be done near the end. I found the beats too clustered together.
Good job!
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MeteorManMike responds:

I knew from the start that looping to the rising strings would be difficult. I wouldn't have to worry about it if I could figure how to loop from a certain point (0:07) in my programming.

Someone else likes the guitar. Matter of personal preference...? I'll have to ponder that for next time...

Thanks for reviewing!

Good Remake

I enjoyed the remake, and considering your goal is to make it into 8-Bit format, sounds as good as it's gonna get.

There's nothing else for me to say but to fix up the beats a bit, they sound scratchy at times.
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Good, but vocal. . .

You are convincing, but I believe you need to project your voice a bit more.

I feel so because it makes it a bit more authentic, since more sports speakers have to talk over cheers, boos, and even some rowdiness of the crowd at points.

You did a good job, overall.

:3 Keep going with your passion!
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Coop responds:

Yeah - I need a stand and pop-guard for that, as the mic quality was compromised if I really projected my voice, as with Brain Blessed.

Beginning reminds me of. . .

Lady Gaga. Don't ask me why : P. It sounds like the background she used for Edge of Glory to me.

The song as a whole sounds wonderful!

Calming but exciting, yet good through and through.

<3 Your work sir : 3
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neolinked responds:

haha lady gaga? thx for the review ^^

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