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[FrogMan the Series Episode 3]

Even with the somewhat bad animation cut in the episode, the humor is a better than the first two episodes. I feel it's a bit more of a relevance to me.

Still, there's some problems that were not addressed. The animation is still poor, and the lines are still mostly choppy. Well, this shows improvement!
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artistunknown responds:

Yeah, this was the episode that I finally switched over to using flash, half way through the episode though, and I didn't know a lot about flash at the time, so that ugly look is there halfway through. At least you found the plot and humor a bit more appealing! The writing and animation are a tad better in the 4th episode, and they are majorly improved in the 5th. Thanks for the review!

[FrogMan the Series Episode 2]

This is, I feel, worse than the first episode. The sexual jokes in here, go unappreciated to me. I feel like they're just thrown in to be put in. The execution of this episode seen to be lessened.

I'm not sure if the woman jokes got to me, or if this was just boring me. The fourth wall breaking feels a lot less impact given the show hasn't had much of a fictional world built up at all.

Sorry, but I just can't see this being a good series without a serious rewrite. I understand it's old and all but...this is just done so poorly in my opinion.
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artistunknown responds:

They are kind of put in there just to be in there, but Wise Frog is supposed to be that stereotypical perverted old man, so there is somewhat of a purpose for them. This episode did always seem a bit boring to me, though when it's just introducing more characters, what can you expect? And like I said in my last reply, there actually is a lot of backstory to the world and characters, but only I and a few other people know about that. So I can understand it not being inpacting. it's my fault for releasing what it essentially a series to a big story, without releasing the big story first. And don't worry, there have been several rewrites. There's sexual jokes sometimes, but I have tried toning things down a bit while still keeping the original nature. I think the writing gets a lot better after episode 5... unfortunately those episodes have still yet to come out. Thanks for the review!

[FrogMan the Series Episode 1]

There's a lot wrong with this. I could barely get through the first two minutes. The animation, for one is horrible. It feels 2-D and the sounds are half decent. It feels really forced, like the lines they're saying her choppy and barely relate to each other line.

The thing that is worst is that I feel the animation plus the comedy that tries to happen here does not work out. I think the best way to describe this is to say some comedy doesn't work out in certain forms.

Overall, I'll say I'm glad you gave it effort and kept the series going.
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artistunknown responds:

I completely agree with this. It's a shame how bad of a first episode this is, I really think it's turned a lot of people off for the rest of a series that does get really good (in my opinion anyways). The animation gets a lot better in the 4th episode (and it's really a lot better in the 5th) because I finally switched over to flash. There is a lot of back story to this world and its characters, but no one except me knows about that, so that's probably why some of the setups and comedy don't work. Even though this is old and I have fixed some things with the episodes that haven't been made yet, it's still helpful. Thanks for the review!

[Adrellia Village #45: SE]

I feel there was a strong improvement with the lip flaps, especially with the girls. The writing has stay solid, and the backgrounds I feel are better(but maybe just because there were no sky against something against something).

But, something else troubles me; why pick to focus on Drake being missing? I feel like there could've been more mixed in plot wise, but that's just a personal opinion.

Good job.
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MistyE responds:

thanks for the review

[The Sugar Claws: III-VII]

<3. . .

I like the ending the most. I can see that the story is starting to pick up a bit, and that there's bound to be some dramatic scene coming next.

I really like how the plot is starting to form, and I'm interested in what is to come.

The artwork is nice, pink, yet it contrasts the mood perfectly.

Outstanding work, my sir =)

I can't understand why this isn't front page!

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Celx-Requin responds:

"I like the ending the most. I can see that the story is starting to pick up a bit, and that there's bound to be some dramatic scene coming next."

I try to make my stories unfold in an organic manner, so I think people might be upset if they expect massive amounts of twists and turns in the upcoming comics.

Regardless, thanks for the review, and I hope you'll continue to read my submissions!
Sincerely,
- Celx

[Ogre & The Witch]

Good, but story lacks.

I like the animation, don't see much classical stuff anymore. It seems to work well, though there were a few rough patches.

I took three stars off for the story, since I found it a bit boring(no offense).

I think you could've had it to be a bit more entertaining in my opinion.

Not to say that the plot you did have wasn't good at all, it just needed some work.

Maybe the Ogre could've morphed into the witch herself, then had a epic fight scene with the original witch dying, then the Orge saying an epic quote of the sorts.

Eh, just my opinion.

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ToonCastleTV responds:

Wow that idea is actually very good!