YumeSin's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Eastern Rosella]

Nice colors.

I like the way you colored the bird, a good color scheme. But, I think you should've posted uncolored, then colored.

But, something tells me that the bird lose a bit of detail when coloring, but, I don't complain. Still looks good, and well done too!

D Great job!

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rubyninja responds:

Well, yes, most of the colour was lost since i drew it in pencil. I did try playing around with the exposure of the picture to bring it how i orriginally drew it, but i didn't have much success :/
Thanks for your comments, i truly appreciate it :)

[Stripe]

Still good.

This is one of the ones I find to be strange. You made the lines a bit more thicker, and thick lines aren't much attracting to me. I like the background behind the first girl, but the girl herself(if she is the focal) I wish her strips were different.

I enjoy your style, but I would rather the stripes be a bit less thick, or for them to be in another style than the regular straight across.

But, as I always say to others and myself, your always the better drawer if you draw well xP

good job!

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saramary3 responds:

Thank you for the review! I agree with the thickness of the lines in areas. I'm still working on my freehand. =)

[Rain]

<3 it.

I really like your style. It reminds me of the 80's, with the tons of exaggeration and the boldness.

If you ever get the chance to color, I would strongly suggest it. They would make your drawings great, and would make them even more bold! I could see pastel working well, or anything that would pop out nicely.

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saramary3 responds:

Coloring is something that I've been working on a lot lately. It's tough trying to figure out! I get the drawing stage done and then I get super picky on what I want to do about coloring it in!

[Taste]

Love it

For some reason, it amuses me. Sorry if it wasn't made to be funny. It's good artwork, I like the style. I'd suggest a bit of light coloring, maybe a crazy background to go with it. You know, to give off that crazy, 'What is going on?!?...Oh' type of feeling.

Nice work! Can't say I can do better myself!

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saramary3 responds:

Thank you so much for the kind review! I'm definitely going to add color... just don't know exactly what yet. Heheh... I'm glad you enjoyed it!