I have the same thoughts as the person below me. The overall look for this picture is nice, but the eyes look strange, and the background could use a change.
I like the idea of this, as well as how it was composed. But I feel like a wooden background does not do this justice. Maybe something more on the darker side to help bring out the mask.
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I like it.
I feel like this could've used a gloss over of the sorts(touch up some of the messy parts, like the gold part of the jacket).
I like the style, it isn't too outward or inward.
The looks of the character are displayed clearly, and doesn't look like no effort whatsoever was made.
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I used to use a lot of these when I used to work with pixels and whatnot.
I'd say this is nice quality. The twists, turns and brightness to it looks great.
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That's the name. Pho.
I'm digging it.
Good drawing, and I always like your drawing styles.
So big compared to mine : (
Reminds me of someone.
I love this, and I love it even more because the guy reminds me of a guy I know :D
The-guy-who-acts-tough-but-isn't-touch thing is one I know personally, and in this, it's well done.
The drawings are really cute, and I like each frame : ) The only thing I could've ask for is...well, nothing.
I like the way you colored the bird, a good color scheme. But, I think you should've posted uncolored, then colored.
But, something tells me that the bird lose a bit of detail when coloring, but, I don't complain. Still looks good, and well done too!
: D Great job!
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Well, yes, most of the colour was lost since i drew it in pencil. I did try playing around with the exposure of the picture to bring it how i orriginally drew it, but i didn't have much success :/
Thanks for your comments, i truly appreciate it :)
This is one of the ones I find to be strange. You made the lines a bit more thicker, and thick lines aren't much attracting to me. I like the background behind the first girl, but the girl herself(if she is the focal) I wish her strips were different.
I enjoy your style, but I would rather the stripes be a bit less thick, or for them to be in another style than the regular straight across.
But, as I always say to others and myself, your always the better drawer if you draw well xP
Thank you for the review! I agree with the thickness of the lines in areas. I'm still working on my freehand. =)
I really like your style. It reminds me of the 80's, with the tons of exaggeration and the boldness.
If you ever get the chance to color, I would strongly suggest it. They would make your drawings great, and would make them even more bold! I could see pastel working well, or anything that would pop out nicely.
Coloring is something that I've been working on a lot lately. It's tough trying to figure out! I get the drawing stage done and then I get super picky on what I want to do about coloring it in!
For some reason, it amuses me. Sorry if it wasn't made to be funny. It's good artwork, I like the style. I'd suggest a bit of light coloring, maybe a crazy background to go with it. You know, to give off that crazy, 'What is going on?!?...Oh' type of feeling.
Nice work! Can't say I can do better myself!
Thank you so much for the kind review! I'm definitely going to add color... just don't know exactly what yet. Heheh... I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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