YumeSin's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[William, I'm Coming Home]

I really liked the video, even though I'm not a huge Journey Fan. The music was smooth the whole time, and the animation was a good pair with the song. The humor was well timed as well.

However, I feel like sometimes the animation was awkward, and looked a bit bland. Some examples are when you have your character(William I presume?) look out into the sunset. The water against the sky against the grass looks choppy with the color combination but it does not diminish the quality of your work.

This is coming a person who hasn't seen most of your series by the way, but I find it enjoyable nonetheless. I would still say work on the scenes where you have water against sky or sky against the ground. The animation looks a bit low quality in those bits, but other than that, it works. I feel like you have created your own art style and I do not want to say that's bad. Just certain scenes it needs work done. 4 Stars!
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[CLOPPING.MOV]

I like the art style and the whole plot : D I never really knew what a brony was though. Or cloppers.

For stars to the guy which people rage at for no apparent reason.

Speedo responds:

Bronies are adult males who are infatuated with the show which is pretty much aimed at 6 year old girls: "My Little Pony Friendship Is Magic". Cloppers are the dark side of the bronies - they are the people who think the cartoon ponies are sexually attractive and masturbate to them. Please ladies, contain yourselves.

[American Pokemon]

Good.

I don't see why people take this so seriously.

The author posted in his comments about the subject, and well, I can honestly say there's more f'd up stuff on newgrounds.

There's hentai, trolling, and well...that is just the beginning of the rabbit hole.

SO, before you go and chew this author out, I suggest you watching/playing some more things on here. You, referring to all of the people that find this extremely offensive, may start trippig ballz when you find some other "graphic" moves/games.

For the actual animation:

It was well animated, story went along well, but I felt like it was missing..something. Not sure what, but I feel like it was missing something.

[The Sugar Claws: III-VII]

<3. . .

I like the ending the most. I can see that the story is starting to pick up a bit, and that there's bound to be some dramatic scene coming next.

I really like how the plot is starting to form, and I'm interested in what is to come.

The artwork is nice, pink, yet it contrasts the mood perfectly.

Outstanding work, my sir =)

I can't understand why this isn't front page!

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Celx-Requin responds:

"I like the ending the most. I can see that the story is starting to pick up a bit, and that there's bound to be some dramatic scene coming next."

I try to make my stories unfold in an organic manner, so I think people might be upset if they expect massive amounts of twists and turns in the upcoming comics.

Regardless, thanks for the review, and I hope you'll continue to read my submissions!
Sincerely,
- Celx

[Sir Henry Studios Intro]

Could use work

I'm no flash artist, but I feel as though the intro was a nice length, but the size is o_oily.

I never saw an intro with so many MB's in my life!

I say compress it, or try something else. I don't really fancy introductions at all, I find them kinda annoying x-X'

But, as for this one, it seemed to be good(though I'm not quite sure what a 'good' introduction could consist of).

Anyways, overall, it needs some work. And some compression.
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[To Be Mad!]

Ending good, overall story decent.

I think I would've did the same at the end, as well as burn the computer.

The story was decent, I guess it would've worked better if it were, at the middle, the faceless woman would've kicked him in the junk when he touched her but, then he could say the same line he had said, just a bit different,

"Jesus, this fucking hurts"

And cue the ending.

I like the animation too, found it good that you didn't use faces actually. Made the watcher focus more on what the faceless man was saying instead of how he looked.

Good, could've been better, but what am I? D:

GJ!

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[Ogre & The Witch]

Good, but story lacks.

I like the animation, don't see much classical stuff anymore. It seems to work well, though there were a few rough patches.

I took three stars off for the story, since I found it a bit boring(no offense).

I think you could've had it to be a bit more entertaining in my opinion.

Not to say that the plot you did have wasn't good at all, it just needed some work.

Maybe the Ogre could've morphed into the witch herself, then had a epic fight scene with the original witch dying, then the Orge saying an epic quote of the sorts.

Eh, just my opinion.

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ToonCastleTV responds:

Wow that idea is actually very good!

[What's Going On Here?]

Love it.

I enjoyed this, it was funny. The animation was on point, and it kept me wondering what was gonna happen throughout most of the video.

The ending was enjoyable, though I was expecting something like the robber driving back and slapping him, and giving him a piece of his...mind(get it, mime, M--Okay. I'll leave the comedy to you professionals : P).

I enjoyed it, good job. :3

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MyKindOfFlash responds:

Do you wanna write my next script? Ha ha.

Thanks for the detailed review, it was very nice of you. :D

[Pico's Penny Prank]

Nice, but. . .

I think there's a few elements lacking in this video that would've made it better.

The animation was good, but it could've used a bit more here and there, minor details.

Soundtrack was nice, I enjoyed that the most ^-^ The prank he made was a bit funny, but I was hoping the kid would've got ran over by the truck(yes, my mind is just that messed up).

But, considering everyone else isn't as blood crazy as me, the prank was a thumbs up.

Any who, nice job : D

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ToonCastleTV responds:

Its true that animating everything on 1s wouldve gave it a smoother effect, but wouldve taken away from the expressiveness of the movements I feel. Im gonna add length + a bloody ending for viewers like you when I gotta sec ^^

[The Sugar Claws: II-VII]

Plot is really nice

I find Maple's story odd, but interesting. I like the fact it isn't too stereotypical and the story isn't driven to be either Alice in Wonderland or Twilight with her dreams.

The artwork is really unique to me, it speaks to me in a way. The only thing I'd want you to change is the text, it's hard to read(with glasses on, I'm as blind as a bat).

Good work, I look forward to watching/reading the rest =D

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Celx-Requin responds:

Cool I hope you do!

- Celx